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| | [book]Clueless (Comedy, mystery, action, maybe horror) | |
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urakan Jedi
Number of posts : 6 Registration date : 2008-02-20
| Subject: [book]Clueless (Comedy, mystery, action, maybe horror) Sat Sep 13, 2008 8:36 pm | |
| This is a comedy/mystery/maybe horror/action book. Please, laugh/cry/scream - Spoiler:
*what’s on the back of the book* Just any other ordinary day for Joe Banks. It was nearing 3 o’clock in the afternoon. He was just ending his daily walk with his tailless black lab, Buddy, right when his life would change forever.
Chapter 1
“What happened?” Joe said curiously just waking up inside of the Hospital, “Where am I?” “Hey, honey, are you feeling well?” Joe’s mother, Cindy, asked him. “I’m feel fine,” Joe said trying to sit up and ending up hurting himself, “well, not if I do that... Why am I here, mom?” “You were at the front of the house walking Buddy, then a brick hit you in the head.” Joe’s mother said awkwardly. “A brick? I got hit in the head by a brick?!” “Yes, hun, it came out from no where.” “A brick can’t just come out of no where, mom.” “True. But none of the bricks from the neighbors were missing, no windows broke, no evidence of anything.” “Mom, somebody had to do it.” Or something Joe said in his mind.
“Miss Banks, the doctor would like to see you.” One of the nurses of the hospital said. “I’ll be right there.” Joe’s mom replied. “Hey, Joe, why don’t you go back to sleep?” “I’ll try, mom” Joe replied, laying his head down onto the pillow, going into a deep sleep. “Sleep well, we’ll get this all figured out soon.”
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Joe, tossing and turning around in his bed having a “napmare”. Jumping up from his dream with a gasp, Joe almost had a heart attack. For there was sitting at his feet was a terifying...
BRICK
Letting out a terrifying scream his mother, the doctor and a nurse came rushing in. Joe, pale as snow with the most terrifying look on his face pointed to the brick.
C+C please! First chapter's a little short, but it keeps you reading! I do not know what will happen in the next chapter, so please tell me what you'd like to see happen next. | |
| | | darthstich Supreme Chancelor/Admin
Number of posts : 1215 Location : My Secret Moon Base, on the Moon Registration date : 2008-01-29
| Subject: Re: [book]Clueless (Comedy, mystery, action, maybe horror) Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:04 pm | |
| Did you write this U? It looks good | |
| | | urakan Jedi
Number of posts : 6 Registration date : 2008-02-20
| Subject: Re: [book]Clueless (Comedy, mystery, action, maybe horror) Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:22 pm | |
| - darthstich wrote:
- Did you write this U? It looks good
Sure did! Here's chapter 2! - Spoiler:
Chapter 2
“Boy, what a dream” Joe said while breathing deeply, “I actually thought there was a brick at my fee-” his voice trailing off when we looked at his feet. When he noticed, he let out another terrifying scream. “Are you ok honey?” Joe’s mother said running over to her son. “Why is there a brick in my hospital?” asked the doctor slowly walking to the end of the bed. “Muddy footprints on the floor!” the nurse said in a scary kind of way heading to the janitor’s closet for a mop. “Is everything ok, son?” Joe’s mother asked worryingly. “I’m fine, mom. I just had a nightmare and thought I saw a brick at the end of the bed.. turns out it’s true.” Joe said.
The nurse was ready to put the mop on the floor when Joe’s mother told her not to. They argued a little, but Cindy, Joe’s mother, always won arguments. Cindy called the police (not because arguing with the nurse, of course), and they started to do there thing.
“Whoa, look at that!” Joe said pointing to the wall. Everyone stopped what they were doing and looked where Joe’s finger pointed. Right next to the window, two bricks were missing. And once again, there was another terrifying scream in the background.
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| | | Rocks Jedi Master/Moderator
Number of posts : 332 Location : A galaxy far, far away... Registration date : 2008-02-02
| Subject: Re: [book]Clueless (Comedy, mystery, action, maybe horror) Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:47 am | |
| Intriguing read so far...
I was thinking that the person throwing the bricks may have teleporter abilities... I am wondering what's in the Janitor's closet... | |
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